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The way the wooden floor creaked at the light steps you took, the feelings of that sweetly scented wind going through your body, and the sound of the music moving your body in perfect unison was all simply intoxicating. However, the person playing the music was simply more intoxicating. You knew Roderich Edelstein, by name only, but you knew everything about him, the way his expression changed at every note he played, how his fingers moved across the soft keys of the piano; you found yourself starring at him every day.

Yet you never could tell such a luxurious man your feelings. A mere dancer could never reach the status of Roderich. Therefore, you would translate your frustration through dance. His music would move your body to show how much you craved for him. Nevertheless, once the music would stop you'd clam up and become shy, thinking about him watching you was too much for you to even think about it.

"Alright ladies! In one week is our big performance in the Carnegie Hall! So, be sure to be first thing in the morning tomorrow."

You knew that it was your big chance. Roderich would be playing the piano, and of course your whole class would be performing. However, you had a solo part. The light would shine on you and everyone would watch. That didn't make your stomach turn into mush; what did was Roderich was going to watch you. You would be the center of the whole performance in those mere seconds.

You blushed as you got to the dance studio the next morning. You thought this over and over, thinking only that thought for the night. You had your ballet shoes in one hand and your bag in the other, when you heard someone playing the piano. You were in the hallway, but since it was early and there was no on in the studio you could hear every note as if you were right next to it. It came from your Practice room. You took a peek inside and Roderich playing. You felt your face become hot as you noticed him playing and your heart skipped a beat every time you heard a different note play. You quietly stepped inside, since you had to practice; you had to go inside, however Roderich stopped playing once he saw you walk in.

"Oh!" You panicked, "Don't mind me! I only came for more studio time!" He smiled and closed his books of notes.

"You're ______, right?" He asked, his voice off tune, but cute nevertheless.

"Yea-yes!" You blushed; he got up and walked to your direction.

"I've seen you dance before." He said, "You're a really good dancer."

"Why…" You blushed looking away from his gaze, "Thank you. You aren't too bad on piano." He touched your cheek moving your face to your direction.

"You shape the music I feel." Roderich said.

You looked up and gazed into his eyes. His violet eyes gleamed in passion, he reached for you hand and pulled your shoes out of his hand. You let go of them and he smirked.

"Let me put these on for you." He smiled.

You nodded as you sat on the bench behind you. You put your bag down as Roderich pulled your flip-flops off of your feet, kneeling down in front of you. He leaned towards your feet and kissed the top off your feet; you gasped holding your mouth.

"Roderi-?!"

"You have such soft skin." He smiled.

He looked up and kissed your lips. You closed your eyes enjoying the feeling of his lips against yours, and his tongue rubbing against yours. His long slender fingers feeling your curves. Roderich pulled away and finally kissed your neck as the final note.

"Will you teach me how to dance?" He grinned. You blushed and nodded in agreement, as he lead you to the dance floor, pulled very close to him, you felt your heart beat fast. You both swayed to the beat of your hearts.

Fin.
I hope you like it! Sorry it has taken so damn long!
I have been really busy! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!
Anyway, next up is Hungary!
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:icondevilishly-beautiful:
I am SOOO glad (no sarcasm intended) that I wasn't the only one who immediately thought of the song by Breaking Benjamin (lol almost wrote Breaking Bad)
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marchingbane Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  New Deviant  Artist
*cough cough* Nice story.
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Shidaria Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This wouldn't happen to be written off of the song Dance With THe Cevil by Breaking Benjamin, would it?
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, it is! :meow:
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:iconshidaria:
Shidaria Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, I love that song!
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Muni-teh-kitty Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well THEN... remind me to get tishues when reading these :D
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Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okayy~ lol! X3
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HikariXSaysXMeow Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
awwwww
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thaanks for reading!
:iconbowplz:
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:icontheedgeofthesea:
TheEdgeOfTheSea Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, have you ever heard the Breaking Benjamin song Dance With The Devil? It fits here perfectly XD
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:iconnickgroffbabe101:
NickGroffBabe101 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I adore BB!
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:icontheedgeofthesea:
TheEdgeOfTheSea Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Me too! I have almost every song recorded my them on my iPod XDD
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NickGroffBabe101 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like Firefly and Polyamorous. I think Saturate and We Are Not Alone were their best work. <3 Get better Ben...
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TheEdgeOfTheSea Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My faves are Dance With The Devil and Diary of Jane. Crawl was pretty good too
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NickGroffBabe101 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Agreed.
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Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was what inspired me!
I listened to the song and fell in love,
I had to write something about it...
But then I had to decide which character...
so I decided Austria! XD
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TheEdgeOfTheSea Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love that song so much!
I'm writing a fan-fic for America off the song "Hero" by Nickleback
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Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice!
I like to make fanfics out of
song. Especially since I can just
get the title of the song for the
title of the fanfic.
And... I love America! Would you mind keeping
me posted on your fanfic!? >_<
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TheEdgeOfTheSea Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely :)
Still working on the beginning, but it's slowly coming along!
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Good!
I like reading new material!
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PianoFaceLady Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
Awesome story!! ((Ooc: Shit! he has slender fingers! Only a Bro would know....XD))
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Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I had a piano teacher come to my school play.
And he was from Austria, when I shook his hand
I literally yelled out, "You have such slender fingers!"
So, I couldn't get that out of my head, and I thought
of Austria and was like XD
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PianoFaceLady Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
My orchistria teacher is from Austria! She is amazing! It is odd how Germans have such slender fingers! XD I love it! XD
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Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! Sexy Germans!
*w*
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:iconpianofacelady:
PianoFaceLady Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
Yush!!!
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HUGE-Anime-Freak Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It was cute. <3
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you!
I am glad you enjoyed it.
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:iconhuge-anime-freak:
HUGE-Anime-Freak Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome! xD
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pokemonsoulsm Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
You are a very talented writer
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw! Thanks!
I am really glad you think so!
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firepuddles Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
AWWWWWWWWWW!!! SO FRIGGEN CHARMING!!!
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! I know devilish Austria!
XD Thank you for reading!
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:iconfirepuddles:
firepuddles Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
wellcome ^-^
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MapleGaming2013 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
adorable!
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you!
I was hoping for that kind of reaction!
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RikoxBlackstar Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee: :iconifaintplz:

LOVELOVELOVELOVE
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Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! Thanks so much!
I am glad you like it!
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:iconmonkchoo24:
monkchoo24 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Wow...That was good
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:iconwierdo035:
Wierdo035 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw! Thanks!
I try my best!
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:iconmonkchoo24:
monkchoo24 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
np
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